dear god how long were you working on this it looks like work from a top ranking studio from when studios cared about quality animation. kudos man kudos you deserve so much praise if you don't at least get front page then you will have been robbed sir.
very very good i quite enjoyed this great classic sprite movie one question though the background from when mario first appear what game is that from?
the animation is pretty solid especially for your first even back then you were a cut above most here. great choice in voices all of them were spot on.
i would like to ask though how i can contact doras english voice actress i tried google but it wont find her
this is awsome very well done and you say this is your first time EVER you have got some skills my friend keep it up but i would lke to see what you'd be capable of story wse to some time
look dude i wanna cut you some slack because you are a novice but at least animate your movie. its not that hard infact some animation softwhere lets you animate sprites sepretly and move it across the screen so you dont have to do it frame by frame thats one of the reasons people use sprites. honestly slide shows really dont work well for this type of thing and dont work for newgrounds.
how ever i do like your story but skiping over the first part is a bad move if you wish to make an effective story you must at least start at the begining. the only other flaw is the lack of a start button its kinda nice if people can choose when to start it rather then it looping for ever.
please dont give up at this i am sorry if i sounded harsh at all but i am only trying to help you by pointing out these flaws and things to improve on. i do think you are a wonderful story writer just take what i have said to heart and i know you will improve.
nice animation is a tad stiff but thats miner and this is from 7 years ago so no big deal i quite like it. although you did neglect to do a joke on the fact that during the andross fight in the game he was actually pooping rocks at ya and trying to suck you up his butt. albeit he had another face attached to his butt at the time but still.
i would like to ask how to contact the mel p the girl who played crystal i googled her and i couldent find her. her crystal voice was spot on simply amazing
No idea, I haven't spoken to her in a few years. Sorry.
not bad you have skill in animation but to make it sexier try making it go a little slower right now she moves a tad to fast
great animation great script short and sweet but although the voices fit they were a little hard to understand at timesthe 3rd nerd needed subtitles or make the music quieter either way .
overall quite good impresive actually
an odd mix of disterbing and funny definantly newgrounds material
the audeo is this thing is a travisty i could barly hear any thing i couldent hear a word when the sound effects were happening and your voice acters were wispering which made it worse plus the audio was of such low quality it gave me a head ache word of advice get better at doing audio but the consepts interesting from what i saw before my head ache made me turn it off
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